Feedback From rough cut

Looking at the rough cut there are many faults, from the lipsinging to the story of the video itself. From our pitch we planned on using less than 2 mid shots however looking at the footage we have used many mid shots. The location and setting of the video worked well however these places were too overcroweded making it hard to work at a steady pace.

We started brainstorming on the possible effects we could use not only to make the video more attractive but also have somewhat a connotation with the story line, we came up with using fades, cross disolves, sepia and gamma tones. Thinking about the contrast between the " Real World" and "Dream World".
We also changed the homeless character in our film as we felt the new character playing the role would suit much better. Looking back at the rough cut many of the shots are very shakey making the artist face go our of the screen, we will need to shoot with a tripod as it would make it more steady.