Analysis of a sequence from the rough cut

One sequence from the rough cut that i intend to change in light of feedback was the shot of alima as she walks down the allyway and throws change to the guitarist. this is because the shot is very shakey and alimas head bounces out of the shot multiple times throughout the shot. Our teacher also pointed out about that shot so we decided to reshoot it while re filming again. We will make sure this doesnt happen the second time as we will use a still shot using the tripod rather than the handheld filming that was originally done for this shot as walking downhill backwards trying to film does not make it easy to maintain a steady shot.

Screen grab from rough cut, showing the problems from the unsteady camera work that needs to be changed before the final edit.

This is the clip from the rough cut that i want to change.