Audience Feedback

We presented our rough cut to our fellow peers the response we got back was surprising they liked it yet they did give us constructive critism. Before showing it we already knew we had a lot of work to do for the real edit. As the students observed the video, we achieved some of the aims we want from the audience such as laughing, moving to the beat and understanding the story line.

We asked for points to think about when constructing our real edit, the response was:

• To think about shooting new scenes, to make the sequence much clearer.
• Add special effects
• Add transitions when "entering the dream" possibly use black and white to clarify the contrast between the " real world" and " dream world"
• To use a wider variety of shots

We will take these points in mind, although we have already started to make other changes to our real edit too.